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I’m giving up
Life is empty now
My dust is blowing
In the wind
Because of sin
I’m ready to die
As fast as I can
At my own hand
All is over for
Me, because
I chose to
Not be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 6:34 PM
Very sad and frstrating thoughts you have penned
Nutter Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Suicide is the most selfish act a person can commit. Tomorrow may be better. Touching write because I have been on the bottom and could not see a way out. It is never easy, take it one step at a time, and yes you will get knocked down but you must get back up and try again. Eventually you will succeed
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October 26, 2010 at 6:04 PM
what if tomarrow is better? what if you fall in love or hit the lottery. what if tommarow you see the savior living in your land. is'nt it worth the wait. jhl
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