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wrote a poem not to long ago
came straight from the heart,mind,body and soul
some have read but fail to comment on it
i wonder why
could it be what i said
or the topic at hand
was it too explicit
or was it that they was simply not feeling it?
im referring to "cocaine dreams"
i would like to hear feedback
whether negative or positive
let me now what you think
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