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thoughts pounding
echoing loudly inside my brain
feelings hammering
clamoring tinges of this pain
a facade that slips
its anchoring clips
strength that's feigned
a tin heart, that's dangling from
a braided chain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/3/2010 10:13:00 PM
Very nice. Brings the reader right in.
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