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away!
my moments
are nude!
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February 18, 2016 at 10:25 AM
GOOD ONE
A  Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Like a haiku. I like this. SKAT
Sediqi Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:20 AM
one question;lyrics is divided into to categories;Sonnet and Ode.so if some body marks sonnet for example;he could mark lyrics and they were both correct right?I think one poem can fit over one categories here am i right?In Persian poems i didn't experience such a thing but i think,in English this is too disorganizing to decide what type of poem is it.
Zarban Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Yes, you're right. It has a taste of Haiku for me, too. To tell the truth, I should say that, the spirit of Haiku is present in most of my short works.
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January 6, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Yes, you're right. It has a taste of Haiku for me, too. To tell the truth, I should say that, the spirit of Haiku is present in most of my short works.
Sediqi Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Congradulations for being the newest iranian poet in the community.
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January 7, 2016 at 5:21 AM
SKAT A is really wise she knows every thing.
Zarban Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 1:26 PM
Thank you so much.
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