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“By the calm cold chill so silent like winter 
So quick and abrupt like the pinch of a splinter 
A hand drew near to my corpse as I live 
No soul to be stolen no feelings to give 

My riches have spent all the will to go on 
And all melody has left is but the end of a song 
What more can I give to the doom of the dead 
No sip of cold water or a splinter of bread 

No battle wound bleeding to sponge back to health 
No pockets still willing to feed off of wealth 
No promise of heaven to the ones who have died 
No lips to secure to show who has lied 

My silver has tarnished to a pitiful rust 
My blanket has withered to a state of no trust 
What is becoming of me and my will 
No joy to have cherished or dreams to fulfill 

Just a bucket of tears that I weep still inside 
And a plot still dug in case I have died 
By the calm cold chill as lovely as snow 
I give in to the hand that bids me to go”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 29, 2009 at 11:44 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Levi. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 28, 2009 at 10:11 AM
"The Hand That Bids Me Go" would be a good title. Sad write about a subject most don't want to hear or talk about. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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