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amber sun d i s s o l v e s,
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 in mist,
 ice f i e l d s sigh, soften.
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February 14, 2026 at 6:18 AM
Ah i miss doing these sis! I always admired the way you did your hikus and also how beautiful your word choices are honestly, this is beyond artistic of you! Especially the last line how youv personified elements of nature is so very impressive! An absolute pleasure visiting you today! A fave this is for me sis. Sending you light always
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