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Beyond birds' eye view,
Concealed behind life's chaos
Lies what just hearts reach-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 10/1/2025 11:17:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Rachel Steinmetz
Date: 10/3/2025 7:12:00 AM
Thank you so much!! Sorry for late response was having problems logging in…
Date: 9/29/2025 4:48:00 PM
Inspiring work, :)
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Rachel Steinmetz
Date: 10/3/2025 7:13:00 AM
Thank you so much!! Sorry for late response was having trouble logging in…
Date: 9/29/2025 4:12:00 PM
Pretty haiku Rachel. Achtung! Are you new? If so welcome to PS
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Rachel Steinmetz
Date: 9/29/2025 4:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom!!
Date: 9/29/2025 10:01:00 AM
Revealing thoughts and honest hearts and poets as strong and beautiful as you, have a precious day dear :)
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Rachel Steinmetz
Date: 9/29/2025 4:23:00 PM
Oh, Thank you, Mystic Rose Rose! How beautiful! Thank you for taking the time to comment!
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