Notes About The Poem

This form is called a Collum Lune

It is an American style Haiku with 3 lines

3 words

5 words

3 words

 

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what a mess dog toys strewn around house he doesn’t care
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Wolf Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 9:42 PM
First I thought the 'he' in line three might be the dog... And maybe it is...
Mckeithan Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:34 PM
The beauty of poetry Gershon. It is in the eye of the beholder:)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:48 AM
Truly, they don’t - the carefree ways of dogs yet it’s still a doggy-dog world…darn it, but don’t they peer at you with those sad eyes…lol
Mckeithan Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 2:39 PM
Yes they do. We have two of them so we get a double dose. They do something wrong and it is hard to get mad at them
Goldsmith Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:05 AM
What a cute write. A dog never cares about the mess they make, they just want a fun time. Can I be a dog??? Hahaha!!! Have a fun day with your dog........
Mckeithan Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:47 AM
Thank you Paula. No they never do. We actually have 2--brother and sister and they are border collies and need a ton of attention. LOL can you be a dog. I wish I could as well
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