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This form is called a Collum Lune

It is an American style Haiku with 3 lines

3 words

5 words

3 words

what a mess dog toys strewn around house he doesn’t care

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/5/2025 9:42:00 PM

First I thought the 'he' in line three might be the dog... And maybe it is...

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/5/2025 10:34:00 PM

The beauty of poetry Gershon. It is in the eye of the beholder:)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/4/2025 11:48:00 AM

Truly, they don’t - the carefree ways of dogs yet it’s still a doggy-dog world…darn it, but don’t they peer at you with those sad eyes…lol

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/4/2025 2:39:00 PM

Yes they do. We have two of them so we get a double dose. They do something wrong and it is hard to get mad at them

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/4/2025 11:05:00 AM

What a cute write. A dog never cares about the mess they make, they just want a fun time. Can I be a dog??? Hahaha!!! Have a fun day with your dog........

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/4/2025 11:47:00 AM

Thank you Paula. No they never do. We actually have 2--brother and sister and they are border collies and need a ton of attention. LOL can you be a dog. I wish I could as well