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he left her home no choice about it, walking out of her sight without a word, not given a
chance to say goodbye, every night she lay there and cry. she made a wish as the stars
shone bright, to relive the past, he'd make things right. she blamed her sisters, she
blamed her mom, he blamed himself, for all he did wrong. the years flew by and now she's
grown, with a family all her own, a family he will never know. tho there's still that
anger deep inside, she cant help but to care a little still, for there was once a time
when she was daddies little girl.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 14, 2009 at 11:06 AM
Victoria, I can feel the pain and the love for the daddy in this write. Excellent poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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