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Edens tree is she
Her fruit I long to savor
Forever my love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 3:01 PM
nice haiku,deep-charma
P. Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 3:57 AM
a very cute haiku! :) ~ Arany
Kroeger Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 8:34 AM
aww
Anderson Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 8:22 AM
well we all know what happen when adam ate that fruit, don't we(smile). but seriously, marvin, this is very well done. keep it comin', bro.
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