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Edens tree is she Her fruit I long to savor Forever my love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 4/18/2009 3:01:00 PM
nice haiku,deep-charma
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Date: 4/18/2009 3:57:00 AM
a very cute haiku! :) ~ Arany
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Date: 4/17/2009 8:34:00 AM
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Date: 4/17/2009 8:22:00 AM
well we all know what happen when adam ate that fruit, don't we(smile). but seriously, marvin, this is very well done. keep it comin', bro.
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