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When we meet
 I wanted to be your friend
When we became friends
 I wanted to like you
When I liked you
 I wanted to love you
Now that I love you
 I never want to lose you....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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H. Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 6:50 PM
Good strong write, Breana, it was good it was short, only so much can be said about that, and picked the words perfectly. ~Jen~
Lopez Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 6:14 PM
Nice work Breana.
Haniff Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 1:45 PM
nice one breanna...short and sweeet!....come on the chat will ya?
Loving Iii Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 1:19 PM
ok this only starts the list. john
Ginn Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 5:01 AM
Short but very stong Breana. Great job. Laurie
Ehigiator Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 9:00 PM
Very sweet Breana, Nicely done..strong emotions revealed here, I wish you all the best in finding true happiness...This sounds like you found a love? I hope everything works out for you...God Bless You sweet girl...Tyesha
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