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I feel like a baby begging to be held in someone's loving arms wishing that someone knew what I wanted when I cried or someone doing whatever it took to make me smile sometimes I feel helpless wishing that someone could understand what I was saying and helping me to find my way at times wishing that I could be just as carefree, innocent, and, cute.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/17/2009 3:22:00 PM
The first line of this piece is very strong. The poem flows well and I love the theme in the piece. Great job!
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Date: 1/10/2009 6:30:00 AM
The anquish here, makes me want to tell you someone cares, someone hears your cries. Take care. Don't give up. ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/9/2009 9:59:00 PM
Good use of prose poetry, good emotion and flow. You might want to capitalize your I's to look more professional. Thanks for sharing Judy Riley
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