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I am sittin here trying to remembering the happy
Finally I can 
I remember when I use to be happy
How everthing changed
Some of the bad rushes back to me
A tear slips
Here's the pain
But 
Then I talk to you 
And I am happy again 
Smile comes across my face
Can't believe someone actully 
Wants to be my friend.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 2:01 PM
We're all your friends here at the soup Breana! Full of emotion and significant language... BRAVO my dear!! Best wishes, Keith
Jordan Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 1:31 PM
Breana - Awh - I'm certain you will find many friendly people on this site - What a touching poem - Emotions beautifully expressed - Best wishes for the coming year - God Bless, MJ
Weber Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 9:24 AM
What a wonderful, bittersweet poem, Breana! You express yourself with heartbreaking vulnerability; it compells without being tedious. Phenomenal work! Warm regards, John.
Ilahi Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 7:40 AM
GRT.
Bulger Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 6:18 AM
This is one of the sweetest poems I have read in a long time. :) There is a writer that once wrote: a little girl was late getting home, her mother asked where she had been...the girl says "finding tears" - "finding tears" her mother asked? yes my friend lost hers so I gave her some of mine" Blessings to you in the New Year:)
Ehigiator Avatar
December 30, 2008 at 11:52 PM
very nice touch, i am sure we have all felt that way before. then it makes you think what happened next, i like that.
Brakatu Avatar
December 30, 2008 at 11:35 PM
love the skillful way you changed the mood of the poem.
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