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I fell in trance
Light poke my eyes
Darkness is the brightness I see

Behind my back
A restless crowd chokes,
Building hopes on gloom

In front, a few with cake,
Having to eat with blunt smile
Their eyes blindly open to see

Up and down named heaven and earth
What place does hell have?
Still she dominates the universe

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/3/2024 7:36:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/24/2021 2:43:00 PM

interesting thought, I think her dominance is only a temporary thing.