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Lies is what you tell me Pain is what you bring Hurt is what's left Your trying to destroy me Love is what I keeping givin' you Hope is all gone Trust left along time ago You made up in your mind Not to be a dad I know in my heart That your love is something I never had....

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Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/3/2009 11:18:00 PM

sad, I'm sorry you had to endure that. It's always sad when you are so young a loved one leaves, by choice and sometimes not. my dad passed away when I was 16, I'm 29 now and I didn't even really know him, he wasn't trying to be a father to me or my brothers and he died so suddenly, I always hoped that he would realize his mistakes and chose us, want to have a relationship with us but I never got that chance. I pray you do. You be strong and keep writing....excellent write...tyesha

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/17/2008 6:20:00 AM

Very painful and heart wrenching write. You painted the pain of want and neglect very effectively. Great work!