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Hold me tight and never let me go.
Listen to my heart as it makes my blood flow.
Caress my face gently and feel my pulse race.
Lips on lips, your essence I taste
. 
I look into your eyes to see your heart's desire.
Your feelings for me flare like fire.
Is it love or is it merely lust?
I crave your touch, flesh on flesh, a must.

Your aroma fills me, and makes my heart flutter.
When I try to speak, all I can do is stutter.
Your kiss catches a breathe in my throat.
I'm in such rapture I feel I could float.

I wish for your body to enter mine.
We need for our bodies to intertwine.
It's as if our beings went from two to one, with a twist.
And to think it all started when we kissed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 11/24/2008 11:19:00 AM
Amazing what you've captured here that started with a kiss!! Great writing Aleera. Hope you and yours have a wonderful holiday and come back soon with lots more writes!!
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Date: 11/20/2008 12:44:00 PM
Wow Girl, you can write such meaningful words for your readers to grasp and savor. Helping a fellow poet I want to assist you by pointing out a spelling error. " Your aroma fills me, and makes my hear flutter." I am thinking the word Heart was meant. You be a real Gem Aleera... MPK
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Date: 11/20/2008 6:09:00 AM
Brings back exciting memories. Sigh. You certainly captured that in love feeling, whether it is only chemistry or not, it is awesome. Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 9/21/2008 7:01:00 AM
Aleera - Being a stutter i can truly relate to the line "When I try to speak, all I can do is stutter" - Sounds like you have someone to love - That is a good thing for we all need love - God Bless
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