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I can't show that I'm waiting I'm not crazy once again Lave my body for the taking I'm not alive, This is my sin. I can't show you that I'm happy Lay me down now, I'm not When I'm crying and I'm laughing Save these bullets for your head. I can't show you that I'm lonely Take this life while I'm asleep Distant lives now I'm exposing Changing places this is Deep.

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Michael Jordan

Date: 8/27/2008 8:42:00 AM

When you have a past like mine being open minded comes natural - I have no right or desire to judge anyone - Your poem expresses your true feelings - the trick is to productively learn to process what you write - Nothing has the power to change you as much as your own words for they are God given as is all things in life - God Bless