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I can't show that I'm waiting 
I'm not crazy once again
Lave my body for the taking
I'm not alive, This is my sin.

I can't show you that I'm happy
Lay me down now, I'm not     
When I'm crying and I'm laughing
Save these bullets for your head.

I can't show you that I'm lonely
Take this life while I'm asleep
Distant lives now I'm exposing
Changing places this is Deep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 27, 2008 at 8:42 AM
When you have a past like mine being open minded comes natural - I have no right or desire to judge anyone - Your poem expresses your true feelings - the trick is to productively learn to process what you write - Nothing has the power to change you as much as your own words for they are God given as is all things in life - God Bless
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