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this blue mood I stop believing in fortune cookies

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/2/2019 7:15:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Your thoughts penned made me think about those fortune cookies. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 1/2/2019 12:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jackie. hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2019 11:39:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Jackie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/1/2019 3:48:00 PM

A wonderful haiku, Jackie. In my rules you were supposed to use 3 stanzas and you only used one, but none-the-less a well written Charlieku so I gave you an honorable mention. Congratulations and Happy New Year. Charlie

Jackie Chou
Date: 1/1/2019 4:16:00 PM

I just realized I didn't read the instructions for this contest. I didn't even know it was supposed to be about Christmas! But thanks for liking my haiku!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/26/2018 9:17:00 PM

Very nice! A sad one :(