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this blue mood
I stop believing
in fortune cookies

depressionhaiku

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Sara Kendrick

January 2, 2019 at 7:15 AM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Your thoughts penned made me think about those fortune cookies. Sara

Eve Roper

January 2, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jackie. hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 1, 2019 at 11:39 PM

- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Jackie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

January 1, 2019 at 3:48 PM

A wonderful haiku, Jackie. In my rules you were supposed to use 3 stanzas and you only used one, but none-the-less a well written Charlieku so I gave you an honorable mention. Congratulations and Happy New Year. Charlie

Jackie Chou

January 1, 2019 at 4:16 PM

I just realized I didn't read the instructions for this contest. I didn't even know it was supposed to be about Christmas! But thanks for liking my haiku!