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birds chirp early morn rain pounding smell of the ground worms crawl up for air 4/15/2018 Poetry Contest: 'Haiku no titles, theme NATURE' Sponsored: Mick Talbot

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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/18/2018 11:20:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win with this delightful haiku.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/18/2018 6:20:00 PM
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Congrats, dear.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/18/2018 5:52:00 PM
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Congratulations.... and I'm so glad for worms. In my next life I want to be an earthworm.... They are amazing, I can talk about them for hours ...
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/17/2018 2:09:00 PM
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Sounds like a long dry spell preceded that downpour Eve. Congratulations.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2018 9:29:00 AM
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Such lovely imagery, many congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/17/2018 9:11:00 AM
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Congrats Eve-- you've written a true haiku (not easy to do), letting nature evoke the meaning, as it were.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2018 8:15:00 AM
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- Congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2018 8:07:00 AM
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Congrats on your winning poem, Eve.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/17/2018 1:32:00 AM
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yes, and that early bird gets the worm! Lovely picturing of spring, Eve (I forgot to put untitled on mine and changed it at the last minute. I hope he did not already start eliminations)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/16/2018 2:42:00 PM
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Vivid imagery dear, Eve! Beautifully done!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2018 1:54:00 PM
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Great work Eve, best wishes...
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/16/2018 10:13:00 AM
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Wonderful Haiku! I can smell the earth in it. xomo
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 4/16/2018 8:15:00 AM
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Excellent haiku. Beautifully said. All the best for the contest.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/16/2018 4:15:00 AM
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Perfect image of a downpour, good luck Eve.
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Roy Pett
Date: 4/16/2018 4:05:00 AM
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Wonderful imagery of spring, great Haiku Eve really enjoyed. :))
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2018 2:52:00 AM
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- Lovely haiku, Eve :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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