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birds chirp early morn
rain pounding smell of the ground
worms crawl up for air


4/15/2018

Poetry Contest: 'Haiku no titles, theme NATURE' 
Sponsored:	Mick Talbot

birdrainhaiku

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Susan Gentry

April 18, 2018 at 11:20 PM

Congratulations on your win with this delightful haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

April 18, 2018 at 6:20 PM

Congrats, dear.

Pashang Salehi

April 18, 2018 at 5:52 PM

Congratulations.... and I'm so glad for worms. In my next life I want to be an earthworm.... They are amazing, I can talk about them for hours ...

Jean Murray

April 17, 2018 at 2:09 PM

Sounds like a long dry spell preceded that downpour Eve. Congratulations.

Jan Allison

April 17, 2018 at 9:29 AM

Such lovely imagery, many congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

L. J. Carber

April 17, 2018 at 9:11 AM

Congrats Eve-- you've written a true haiku (not easy to do), letting nature evoke the meaning, as it were.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 17, 2018 at 8:15 AM

- Congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

April 17, 2018 at 8:07 AM

Congrats on your winning poem, Eve.

Andrea Dietrich

April 17, 2018 at 1:32 AM

yes, and that early bird gets the worm! Lovely picturing of spring, Eve (I forgot to put untitled on mine and changed it at the last minute. I hope he did not already start eliminations)