Untimely Admission

What am I doing here again?
I promised I would be gone,
But the muscle fibres beat and pull me back.
It will soon come upon,
So all I can do is lay on track,
and your forlorn look will break my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Firnigl Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 2:26 PM
I kept trying to post clap emoji but it didn't work and replied w??, just imagine it's clapping emoji cause I think the poem is applaudable
Al-Hakim Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 11:49 PM
<3
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March 24, 2026 at 2:25 PM
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March 24, 2026 at 2:24 PM
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Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations on your win with this succinct poem
Al-Hakim Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 12:35 PM
Thanks so much!
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