Untimely Admission

What am I doing here again?
I promised I would be gone,
But the muscle fibres beat and pull me back.
It will soon come upon,
So all I can do is lay on track,
and your forlorn look will break my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 10/4/2025 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this succinct poem
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Lina Al-Hakim
Date: 10/5/2025 12:35:00 PM
Thanks so much!
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