Julie Cottingham Poet Rhyme

Until Then

Call me to the edge my dear

As I abandon all my fears

Wipe the last of lonely tears

My last day on earth draws ever near

Upon the sand my message clear

I lived my life in second gear

Wait for me until you hear

The ringing bells of next new year.

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Danielle White February 11, 2009 at 10:55 AM Ah, a poet who actually rhymes and understands meter! We are of the same ilk. I look forward to reading more of your work. Nice poem, sensitive, meaningful. ******Danielle******

Laurie Ginn February 11, 2009 at 3:37 AM Nice job Julie, I like the line, upon the sand my message is clear. Very thoughtful. Laurie