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Until Then

Call me to the edge my dear As I abandon all my fears Wipe the last of lonely tears My last day on earth draws ever near Upon the sand my message clear I lived my life in second gear Wait for me until you hear The ringing bells of next new year.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/11/2009 10:55:00 AM
Ah, a poet who actually rhymes and understands meter! We are of the same ilk. I look forward to reading more of your work. Nice poem, sensitive, meaningful. ******Danielle******
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Date: 2/11/2009 3:37:00 AM
Nice job Julie, I like the line, upon the sand my message is clear. Very thoughtful. Laurie
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