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Until the Twelfth of Never

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*Image of Mother and Child by Pixabay. AUDIO: The Twelfth of Never, sung by Johnny Mathis (1956) until the twelfth of never a stranger shares confidences~~wedding day words tendered by a mom 2021 August 05 *1st Place* A Brian Strand 1,2 or 3 line ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 August 07

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/12/2021 8:25:00 AM

Interesting work. I think I could go several ways with the interpretation of this one which is very good writing.Congrats on this winner. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/12/2021 2:46:00 PM

Margaret Rutherford afoot, I'm charmingly pleased, Sara, Aloha!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/12/2021 8:12:00 AM

delightful ~ congrats on your top finish

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/12/2021 2:40:00 PM

Line, thanks my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2021 11:09:00 AM

beautiful, William. Congrats.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/7/2021 11:45:00 AM

You are Heaven-sent, Andrea, blessings my friend, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/7/2021 9:13:00 AM

Congrats!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/7/2021 11:44:00 AM

Kim, thanks my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/7/2021 9:07:00 AM

Aloha my friend! Love your nod to one of my all time favorite songs! Makes a perfect backdrop to your very inventive and emotive monoku. Congratulations and blessings!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/7/2021 11:42:00 AM

It's not so much the laudations but the mere acknowledgment that validifies the efforts made my friend. Thanks, Sam, I'm truly grateful, ... and that's a long, long time, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/7/2021 6:37:00 AM

Beautiful Monoku. Congratulations on your win!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/7/2021 11:32:00 AM

Thanks my trustful, Chhristuraj, blessings my friend, Aloha!