Until the Day I Say Good-Bye

Until my hands shake uncontrollably 
Until my eyes can see no more 
Until my muse has disappeared 
Until my mind can't think a thought 
I will keep on writing poetry... 
Until the day I say good-bye  


Bite Size Poem no14 Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Line Gauthier 
7/27/2021
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Callus Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 12:27 PM
You echo some of my thoughts, Charles. Hopefully my mind won't betray me! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 11:52 AM
Hello Charles Messina, yes keep on writing. let it out.enjoy your day my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 11:45 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful/creative-story/write. Never say good-bye just keep on writing. You have a wonderful pen. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Alex Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 6:09 AM
Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulaions!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 5:57 AM
And that day will come. Grieving my mom. Keep writing…let it all out! Congratulations, Charle!
Y. Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 9:19 AM
WoW! Charlie, Seeing this gives me fuel to keep writing! Thanks! Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Messina Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Alexis, I am so happy I can help keep the fire burning...Write on you wonderful poetess :) Have a great day...Charlie
Evans Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 9:09 AM
Oh, Wow!!! Bravo, what an inspiration to all poets to keep writing. Awesome, Charles.
Messina Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 9:59 AM
The meaning behind the poem, Marlene. Thank you! Have a wonderful day :)
Cunningham Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 8:37 AM
Well written Charlie, hopefully not for a long time. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Messina Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 10:01 AM
Thank you, Tom. I am with you on that (lol) All is well my friend, I hope you as well. -Charlie
Alex Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 6:37 AM
Such a beautiful and deep passion is expressed towards poetry. It's beautiful.
Messina Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 10:07 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Christuraj. Keep writing my friend. Stay well...Charlie
Sands Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 5:02 AM
This is inspiring! Yes, keep on writing :)
Messina Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 10:08 AM
Thank you, Heidi. Yes, keep on writing :)
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