Until

~*~ I knew there was a sun that adorned the sky each day Fireflies at twilight in the forests as they play Daffodils and tulips found to bloom most every spring Robins in the sycamore each morning there to sing Waves upon the ocean and a moon up in the sky Stars that brightly twinkle as the evening passes by I knew there were so many things yet I could just not see Until you came into my life and showed these things to me ~*~

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/21/2019 11:46:00 AM

Your rhymes always skip along as if in song!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/20/2019 12:55:00 PM

Once more with feeling: A perfect rendering of the joy of re-discovering Nature's and all of Life's vitality, when shared with a loving partner. B-yoo-ti-ful! Thank you for sharing your gift with us, Chris. :-) gw

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 9:01:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. I always look forward to your humbling comments.

Jane Shields

Date: 10/19/2019 11:44:00 AM

Beautiful. x

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 9:00:00 AM

Thank you so very much Jane.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/18/2019 10:27:00 PM

Such a beautiful sentiment in this one, everything is more beautiful when you have someone to share it with. I love this my friend :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 9:00:00 AM

Thank you Sandy, it certainly is. Beauty is meant to be shared, that is why I always look forward to the poetry you share.

Hello There

Date: 10/18/2019 6:02:00 PM

i am putty in your hands

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 8:59:00 AM

Now I'm thinking of the movie Ghost. : ) Thanks so much my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/18/2019 2:09:00 PM

This is a favorite for sure, because all of this is so important to see and you have shown us this beautifully with your poem. Thanks for sharing :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2019 2:18:00 PM

Thank you so very much my friend. I always see beautiful things when you stop by.