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Unthoughtful Revenge

he looks at his side where her dagger stabbed deep he tries to stem the tide of the blood starting to seep she never felt so happy watching his pain for he treated her crappy as if she was insane she walks away proud while he falls down dead she laughs out loud while the ground busts his head her revenge is complete his life's met its doom she looks so sweet even though she is gloom here's the part that you never knew about the man's heart that she just slew he loved her long and treated her fair he raised her strong with a father's care he told her the truth and that made her mad because the truth was that he killed her dad but her dad had hated her and beat her insane he planned to get rid of her by busting her brain the man jumped in and stabbed the dad's heart it wasn't a sin he believed with his heart so who was right the man or the girl who can solve this plight in this crazy world

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Date: 12/1/2011 9:19:00 AM
i couldn't think of a name......any suggestions???
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