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Elemental
Created by Charles Messina.  This form consists of 7 lines with 7 syllables in each line. And a rhyme pattern of AABBCCA.  The first and last lines must be the same. And an "Elemental" must pertain to all 3 elements- (earth, water, and sky)

Falling raindrops weather rocks untethered from time and clocks. Fueling a thirsty earth water stimulates rebirth. Vapors condense in the sky, and in a blink of an eye, falling raindrops weather rocks. (Elemental) 7/16/2021

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Date: 7/16/2021 10:49:00 AM
Loved how you seamlessly merged the top line in bottom.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/16/2021 12:25:00 PM
Thanks, Rama, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.