Untethered

limitless endless rounds repeating banquet of unmeasured sustenance liquid light released into coolness assuaging my soul's brown thirstiness eyes open unguarded, unafraid sinking in spangled star reflections color arc rushing joyful cascade letting go, untethered forever October 26, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/9/2014 4:44:00 AM

It is amazing how many different paths everyone took with the entries in this contest Faye. Yours felt like joyous freedom to me. Your last two stanzas really wrap this poem up beautifully. Big kudos on your win!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/8/2014 3:13:00 PM

Well done, Faye! Excellent take on this waterfall theme...joy and freedom abound throughout! Congrats on a merited win. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/8/2014 8:37:00 AM

"color arc rushing joyful cascade letting go, untethered forever". I truly like this,congrats Faye

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/8/2014 8:12:00 AM

Beautifully penned Faye. Congratulations on your win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/7/2014 2:12:00 AM

a feast for the soul gushing with wonder, faye..thank you for being part of my contest with my sweet congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2014 10:00:00 PM

I am glad to see this one again and give my congratulations. The title was one of the best I have seen for describing a waterfall.

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/6/2014 9:39:00 PM

Your poem extrudes from me a sense of letting go and freedom. Well done !! Congratulations on your win !!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/6/2014 3:31:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Faye:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/6/2014 3:30:00 PM

YEAH FAYE!! Hey that rhymes. What an amazing representation of a waterfall. Congratulations on your windfall win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2014 3:47:00 PM

it's just so interesting to see all these waterfall inspired poems. Love the idea of untethered that you used in yours, beautiful imagery!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/27/2014 8:44:00 AM

Very lovely Faye! Third n fourth verses just amazing! Gl in contest!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/26/2014 10:29:00 PM

So nice to read your verse this evening. Light & Love

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/26/2014 6:18:00 PM

I couldn't even begin to take this challenge on but it looks like you nailed it Faye. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/26/2014 5:01:00 PM

simply stunning Faye - good luck in the contest - this is a real challenging form:-) hugs jan xx