Untamable

Untamable

There’s a little part inside my mind,
That wants to know, seeks to find.
The missing piece, the hidden view,
The magical part I see in you.

There’s a little piece inside my heart,
That needs to progress, wants to start.
Finding your weakness, while gaining strength,
Breaking down your defensive fence.

There’s a little wish inside my brain,
 A wildness of you, I’d love to tame.
Your stubborn mind, your wondering eye,
The part about you that makes me sigh.

There’s a little mysterious side of you,
That pulls me in, holds me true.
An untamable fire, an uncaptured spirit,
It’s like I’m the rabbit and you’re the carrot.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 17, 2011 at 4:40 AM
I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to read and thank you for your kind comments Jeff. Love, Carol
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May 6, 2011 at 5:36 AM
Attractive poem to say the least. Smiles
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