Unsure Failure

I try so hard to not let you down,
But sometimes your no help at all,
And what i feel makes it seem like im gonna drown,
So here i am on the edge about to fall,
I just wish you could see how hard i try,
Too late as i fall through the air about to die,
Wondering... were your expectations really to high
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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