Fritz Purdum Poet Rhyme

Unsure

Unsure
         of when I look into your eyes
         its me that you see

Unsure
        of when I hold you in my arms
        its me you want it to be

Unsure
         of when I kiss your lips
         its me you savor

Unsure
         if in your heart
         its me you favor

Unsure
         if your touch
         feels for another

Unsure
         if your heart
         desires others

Unsure
         of why I love you
         but just cannot stop

Unsure
         if you love me
         or if you love me not
                                       Unsure
                                                 Unsure
                                                          Unsure

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Maryam Jameela Haniff November 20, 2008 at 3:40 PM great feeling across the entire poem.a very known feeling. well done

Danielle White November 19, 2008 at 10:26 PM Great rhyme, rhythm and meter. A+