Unsundering-Silence of the Sorcerous

O gilded tongue, I dare not speak, your eyes my ruin flash
Seek not the curse, doth silence scream, beg mercy, your agash





Agash is a game played by the Pashtuns in Pakistan
Unsundering is a magical battle fought in the 24th
century by followers of this belief. (thanks Charles!)

08/12/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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That Archaic Poet Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 8:33 AM
Very cool and droll; you have a most unique style and perspective :)
Anderson-Throop Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 1:59 PM
Hello James...thanks for sharing this unusual piece.
Guzzi Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 2:09 PM
Wow..I want to know more do me a blog tell me about it! Light & Love
Culverhouse Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 8:29 PM
interesting write...thanks for the encouragement....I hope to be all right one day...
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Jimbo. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 3:46 PM
Interesting and educational work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on your win James
A   Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 8:48 PM
JAMES;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD
Merryman Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 8:00 PM
An interesting write, James. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Ramage Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 6:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lee
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 1:03 PM
I appreciate the note at the bottom and I really like this one. congrats on your win.
Henderson Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 11:13 PM
Jimbo- -you made me look up the word agash, which was good- -only I couldn't find it , which was bad. Now you owe me. I'm waiting on the definition - Chas Otherwise this sure reads nice.
Williams Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 12:41 PM
whoa there Jimbo, I entered this contest, how on earth am I supposed to beat this, I like it a lot, I don't think you need luck...David
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