Unstoppable Force

Like a strong forceful wind
Like a crashing tidal wave
Like a great burning fire
I will rise from the grave

My arm strong and righteous 
My aim steady and true
My mind is ready for battle
And I'm ready to defeat you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 4:47 PM
Hey Izzy, the form you could label as rhyme, since your stanza rhyme and that is the most common form here, I really liked your energy in your poem. You have shown your force and your readiness, great job :)
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June 10, 2014 at 11:20 AM
Beautiful, powerful write - Bravo! Well done. Kindest regards.
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