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Unstoppable Force

Like a strong forceful wind Like a crashing tidal wave Like a great burning fire I will rise from the grave My arm strong and righteous My aim steady and true My mind is ready for battle And I'm ready to defeat you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/10/2014 4:47:00 PM
Hey Izzy, the form you could label as rhyme, since your stanza rhyme and that is the most common form here, I really liked your energy in your poem. You have shown your force and your readiness, great job :)
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Date: 6/10/2014 11:20:00 AM
Beautiful, powerful write - Bravo! Well done. Kindest regards.
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