Unstoppable

The world around has crumbled once
but you did not crumble with it 
The wind has pushed against you 
when you were on cliffs edge 
but you did not tumble to the bottom 
the life your in has through things at you 
It while keep  to 
your unstoppable
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 25, 2010 at 5:38 AM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Brittany. Love, Carol
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June 24, 2010 at 5:21 PM
the last 3 lines seem to need revising...I don't follow. I like the your unstoppable thought.
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