Unspoken Words

                 UNSPOKEN WORDS

              As my thoughtful words
                     left unspoken,
                            
                  Reveal the words 
             that were kept unopened,
                                   
                      Thinking,
              I would start saying.
                            
            But my wild thoughts had
                 started forsaken.
               
             Can't say it relently aloud,
         Perhaps my spirit was weakened.
                               
                 With my selfhood, 
                 I'm soft-spoken.
                                        
                       Now,
               I regret not saying.
                                     
                       Sorry,
                I was mistaken.
           For I was confused and 
                HEARTBROKEN!


           Written by: Rosey RMV                                   
             07 OCTOBER 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 11/15/2017 9:11:00 PM
Sometimes what we write becomes a light. Thanks for sharing............peace!
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Date: 10/18/2017 9:44:00 AM
Very touching, Rose. One lesson I learned many years ago, we should always tell friends what's on our mind right now because we may not get a second chance; something I regret to this day...
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Rose Vergara
Date: 10/18/2017 12:59:00 PM
Hi John, thank you for your comment. To the readers, this will be a lesson learned. Say it, you might not have a second chance. As I deeply regret that very day!
Date: 10/17/2017 8:36:00 PM
Poignant and touching.
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Rose Vergara
Date: 10/18/2017 1:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mr. Bernard!
Date: 10/8/2017 3:46:00 AM
Beautifully written, I love the end rhyme you used. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Rose Vergara
Date: 10/8/2017 1:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mr. Darren White.
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