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Unspoken Words

UNSPOKEN WORDS As my thoughtful words left unspoken, Reveal the words that were kept unopened, Thinking I would start saying, But my wild thoughts had started forsaken. Can't say it relently aloud, perhaps my spirit was weakened. With my self hood, I'm a soft-spoken. Now, I regret for not saying. Sorry that I was mistaken. For I was confused and HEARTBROKEN! 07 OCTOBER 2017 BY: RMV-tatchvrg

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Ricky Muse

Date: 11/15/2017 9:11:00 PM

Sometimes what we write becomes a light. Thanks for sharing............peace!

John Gondolf

Date: 10/18/2017 9:44:00 AM

Very touching, Rose. One lesson I learned many years ago, we should always tell friends what's on our mind right now because we may not get a second chance; something I regret to this day...

Rose Vergara
Date: 10/18/2017 12:59:00 PM

Hi John, thank you for your comment. To the readers, this will be a lesson learned. Say it, you might not have a second chance. As I deeply regret that very day!

Bernard Chan

Date: 10/17/2017 8:36:00 PM

Poignant and touching.

Rose Vergara
Date: 10/18/2017 1:02:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mr. Bernard!

Darren White

Date: 10/8/2017 3:46:00 AM

Beautifully written, I love the end rhyme you used. Welcome to PoetrySoup.

Rose Vergara
Date: 10/8/2017 1:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mr. Darren White.