Unspoiled

Youth
                                       untouched
                                           innocence
                                                   wide eyed wondering
                                          (mostly) pure in word and deed 
                                    wants of nothing more than fun and frolicking


     





Inspired by Nigel's "Prime" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hayton Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 1:35 PM
Love this one Steve, it brings home so many beautiful memories of being a child, god I wish I could go back and feel that wonder.. Beautiful beautiful... Thanks for your comment on my poem.. Coming from a writer like you, it is inspiring me to really try and write better and better.. Thankyou
Devonshire Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 10:14 AM
Steve, you say much with few words. A very nice commentary on youth - Carolyn
Higgins Avatar
January 26, 2009 at 6:17 AM
Those were the good ole days Steve when carefree was the order of the day. Good luck with this well written piece.
Winter Avatar
January 26, 2009 at 6:02 AM
Oh yes, please take me back, to the truly good old days. Excellent, and good luck! Love, Shar
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