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Unspoiled

Youth untouched innocence wide eyed wondering (mostly) pure in word and deed wants of nothing more than fun and frolicking Inspired by Nigel's "Prime" contest

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Jo Hayton

Date: 2/27/2009 1:35:00 PM

Love this one Steve, it brings home so many beautiful memories of being a child, god I wish I could go back and feel that wonder.. Beautiful beautiful... Thanks for your comment on my poem.. Coming from a writer like you, it is inspiring me to really try and write better and better.. Thankyou

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/13/2009 10:14:00 AM

Steve, you say much with few words. A very nice commentary on youth - Carolyn

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/26/2009 6:17:00 AM

Those were the good ole days Steve when carefree was the order of the day. Good luck with this well written piece.

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/26/2009 6:02:00 AM

Oh yes, please take me back, to the truly good old days. Excellent, and good luck! Love, Shar