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Unshod, with prayer on our lips We ask for love and light But fear and desire, our heart grips Such is our woeful plight That we rise, God descends Our feral cravings ends Thus by grace, soul ascends Meet God Unshod 02-November-2022 Quietus

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Date: 11/2/2022 2:16:00 PM
Grace is so fiercely misunderstood so I liked this "Thus by grace, soul ascends"
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Date: 11/2/2022 7:16:00 PM
Indeed, all is grace. We must invite grace, however.

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