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Unseen Wisdom

constantly 
touching your technology
unknowingly
swimming in my psychology
dabble with forbidden poetic alchemy
cooking timeless rhyme remedies, recipes
read instructions on how to achieve
immortality
steel will steady and
unhurriedly

slow minute by minute process
even slower day by day progress
something to learn or mere nonsense
amazing how a few words 

can spark your consciousness

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Date: 12/2/2014 10:35:00 PM
Love the flow Seby...enjoy the madness tonight.
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 12/2/2014 10:40:00 PM
Madness is right!
Date: 12/2/2014 3:50:00 PM
i believe we learn so much but don't see it because it is such so progress sometimes... i agree
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 12/2/2014 5:04:00 PM
HI Lauren! Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.
Date: 12/2/2014 3:20:00 PM
I love this poem and how well it flows from one line to the next and how it can spark your consciousness
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 12/2/2014 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Shelly! Reading your poetry today has certainly sparked mine :)

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