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Unseen Voyage

The soul is a compass lost at sea, Searching for what it cannot see.

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/26/2025 8:35:00 PM

Very deep- "deep" :)

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:29:00 AM

Thank you. Sometimes the simplest words carry the most meaning—glad it spoke to you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/25/2025 7:06:00 AM

This is very clever. A hidden meaning.

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/25/2025 1:59:00 PM

Thank you. I’m really glad you picked up on the hidden meaning—it means a lot that you took the time to reflect on it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/24/2025 8:57:00 PM

--- Slave to its body flesh // Those two simply do not mesh...

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/25/2025 1:58:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I think you’re exploring the tension between the soul and the body—an interesting perspective. I appreciate you taking the time to engage with the piece.