Unseen Voyage

The soul is a compass lost at sea,
Searching for what it cannot see.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 8:35 PM
Very deep- "deep" :)
O'Neil Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 6:29 AM
Thank you. Sometimes the simplest words carry the most meaning—glad it spoke to you.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 7:06 AM
This is very clever. A hidden meaning.
O'Neil Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 1:59 PM
Thank you. I’m really glad you picked up on the hidden meaning—it means a lot that you took the time to reflect on it.
Wolf Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 8:57 PM
--- Slave to its body flesh // Those two simply do not mesh...
O'Neil Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 1:58 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I think you’re exploring the tension between the soul and the body—an interesting perspective. I appreciate you taking the time to engage with the piece.
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