Unseen

cornflower's bloom
beside a tarred road

stalking buttercups
across the way

motorists pass
unseeing souls
toward unknown sights
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 5:21 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Shanzi" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 10:26 AM
Debbie congrats on your win, very visionary...David
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 9:43 AM
WOW> the BEST!! Congrats, and a fave for me.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 9:32 AM
A lovely reminder of what we miss in our hurried lives. Congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Arowolo Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 6:10 PM
Splendid!Congratulations on your win,Debbie...Light and Love...
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 3:16 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Cornflower's cobalt blue color is beautiful..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 2:11 PM
a rare delight, debbie.. hearty congrats on your win!..:) ( forgot to enter mine).. :) huggs
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 8:05 AM
Congrats Debi on your win.Beautiful!!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 5:26 AM
congrats Debbie on a great win for this incredible entry luv.. feeling the emotion so powerful..
Mac Donald Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 5:24 PM
So much to see, and so much to miss out on. Enjoying the piece, Debs!! Love, Mikki
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 10:04 PM
this is very cool. Love the contrast being made. You rock, Debs.
Hunter Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 3:55 PM
Your talent is amazing...love this little jag!
Sivey Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 3:11 PM
I really enjoyed this poem Debbie, it's very inspiring! I'm glad I read it today! Great Work!!
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