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poem submitted to "1450th" poetry contest, Brian Strand, sponsor
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ hope delicate, bright whispering, fluttering, ascending feather, prayer, burden, condemnation discouraging, stagnating, descending heavy, gray despair
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