Unsealed With a Kiss

As my volcano fills,
I hemorrhage guilt.


4/30/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Susan. Love, Carol
May Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 8:26 AM
congrats on your win Susan
Rozario Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 11:57 PM
Wow love this Susan...congrats on your win.
Grisetti Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 7:30 PM
Congratulations. You have said so much with your two lines.
A   Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 4:14 PM
wow..I forgot this was even yours.. it's xool to forget things... at first i was like what... such a tiny poem... but, it blew my mind .. you are awesome.. congrats with your wonderful win... and I don't know why it stole 2nd place .. he he he..really... your two lines, topped many long poems.. you are awesome Susan.. xox~pd
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 8:43 AM
I AM AWESTRUCK.WOW, GREAT WRITE.
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 8:42 AM
I am AWESTRUCK.WOW, GREAT WRITE.
Lu Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 9:31 AM
very deeply written in this short form. Cindy
A   Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 8:00 PM
Susan, awe.. it only takes a set...to pack a punch... death at times comes with it's own seal.. explosive, and a wait one should not wait for.. love it.... .. have yourself a very wonderful day ;-) LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 12:22 AM
LIke Nette, said, power-packed!!
Onclaud Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 10:16 AM
power-packed in just two lines, susan... yowzah; i like!..:) huggs
Williams Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 9:26 AM
oohh Like this a lot...David
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 7:58 AM
Yikes..Thats a deep one!
Burch Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 7:52 AM
Deep girl, deep! One couplet says it all! Well Done :) big hugs,love deb
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 7:15 AM
Well said ! - oxox Anne-Lise
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