Sara Kendrick Poet Tail-rhyme

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I just enjoy the coloring of the Swallow that flies in the skies here..They look like a purple and chestnut color to me..Early in the morn and late in the afternoon or early evening they dart about catching small bugs...Sara

Unrife

Gray is the day, somber the mood
Clouds so thick emotions just brood
Noisy roosters vent strife

One lone crow across this sky viewed
Caws as he goes with none pursued
Swallows bring sky to life

As they dart, play looking for food
Their wings so angled that is good
Noticed now for unrife

unrife-uncommon
mostly seen in summer
here...

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Jack Horne May 15, 2012 at 11:29 AM I loved imagining those roosters! Great picture you painted here, my friend. Many congrats on all your wins : )

Russell Sivey May 15, 2012 at 1:29 AM This is a fabulously written write here Sara! I really enjoyed reading it this evening! What a terrific and supreme poem! Great Work!!

John Rhinem May 14, 2012 at 4:26 PM Smile ~ "First I Must Say, Tis Forever A Joy When I Visit You, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful, Beautiful Sara * Second, After Viewing This Your Beauties Wonderful Verse Thrice Times, Amid The Intrigue, I Find Something Very Lovely * Yet I Ask Myself, What Could Be More Lovely Then, 'You * My Love, Forever;'" John!:) ~

Harry Horsman May 14, 2012 at 3:10 PM this is so good Sara, so interesting and a pleasure to read. harry

Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2012 at 2:50 PM Special form Tail-rhyme, but you do it professionally Sara. - oxox love Anne-Lise