Unrife

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I just enjoy the coloring of the Swallow that flies in the skies here..They look like a purple and chestnut color to me..Early in the morn and late in the afternoon or early evening they dart about catching small bugs...Sara

Gray is the day, somber the mood Clouds so thick emotions just brood Noisy roosters vent strife One lone crow across this sky viewed Caws as he goes with none pursued Swallows bring sky to life As they dart, play looking for food Their wings so angled that is good Noticed now for unrife unrife-uncommon mostly seen in summer here...

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Jack Horne

Date: 5/15/2012 11:29:00 AM

I loved imagining those roosters! Great picture you painted here, my friend. Many congrats on all your wins : )

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/15/2012 1:29:00 AM

This is a fabulously written write here Sara! I really enjoyed reading it this evening! What a terrific and supreme poem! Great Work!!

John Rhinem

Date: 5/14/2012 4:26:00 PM

Smile ~ "First I Must Say, Tis Forever A Joy When I Visit You, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful, Beautiful Sara * Second, After Viewing This Your Beauties Wonderful Verse Thrice Times, Amid The Intrigue, I Find Something Very Lovely * Yet I Ask Myself, What Could Be More Lovely Then, 'You * My Love, Forever;'" John!:) ~

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/14/2012 3:10:00 PM

this is so good Sara, so interesting and a pleasure to read. harry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2012 2:50:00 PM

Special form Tail-rhyme, but you do it professionally Sara. - oxox love Anne-Lise