Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

Unrest of Spirit

With his spirit focused on thoughts of doomsday
Unrest is a constant reminder happiness eludes him
Life’s tapestry seems painted with a brush of grey
It’s hard to feel hope when he feels down and blue

Unrest of spirit comes in waves to be caught early
Look at his life and identify what’s not workin’
Needing to find a support group that's friendly
Focused on true interests and passions deep within




AP: 3rd place 2020

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M. L. Kiser November 17, 2018 at 11:14 PM Excellent helpful advice. Well-penned. Line Gauthier November 17, 2018 at 11:42 PM Thank you so much for your lovely visit and compliment, ML.

Caren Krutsinger November 17, 2018 at 11:10 PM A gentle poem that is filled with brilliant advice; for a support group must be friendly, and passionate, and kind. The people who can chase off doomsday realize that it is difficult to feel hope without a support group- possibly nigh onto impossible. Line Gauthier November 17, 2018 at 11:47 PM Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Caren - positive people are key to uplifting our spirits.