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Unrest of Spirit

With his spirit focused on thoughts of doomsday Unrest is a constant reminder happiness eludes him Life’s tapestry seems painted with a brush of grey It’s hard to feel hope when he feels down and blue Unrest of spirit comes in waves to be caught early Look at his life and identify what’s not workin’ Needing to find a support group that's friendly Focused on true interests and passions deep within AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on November 17, 2018 for contest UNREST OF SPIRIT sponsored by JULIA WARD

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/17/2018 11:14:00 PM

Excellent helpful advice. Well-penned.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/17/2018 11:42:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and compliment, ML.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/17/2018 11:10:00 PM

A gentle poem that is filled with brilliant advice; for a support group must be friendly, and passionate, and kind. The people who can chase off doomsday realize that it is difficult to feel hope without a support group- possibly nigh onto impossible.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/17/2018 11:47:00 PM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Caren - positive people are key to uplifting our spirits.