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Unrest of Spirit

Spirits shook in a half empty tumbler’s unease Trembling hands fumbled the spillage of disease He lost his staggering soul quaking and marred At the bar of destruction from finish to start Stirred and shaken an olive branch fell into his fray A guardian angel suspended increasing decay Touched some remnant of reason and reinvented Water from wine no more fragments fermented 16th November 2018 Contest: Unrest of Spirit Sponsor Julia Ward

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/16/2018 9:10:00 PM

I admire your artistry and love the spirit of your poem, Kai. Beautiful in its expression, insight and imagery. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/17/2018 1:02:00 AM

Thank you Susan. That is a huge compliment and I will cherish that. Kind wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/16/2018 2:22:00 AM

- A great poetic poem for this contest, Kai :) - Best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/17/2018 12:59:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Liese. True story. Many wishes, Kai