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Unrequited Love

As walking over blazing hot coals Is the love that blooms suddenly Deceiving the naive heart Ensnaring fantasies Weaved with the lies Planted in mind Waking from The vain Dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/1/2016 8:41:00 AM
Yes, the pain is intense ... Very well said ...
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 12/1/2016 9:03:00 AM
Thank you Probir
Date: 11/30/2016 1:17:00 PM
Yep, it sure is Nayda. It hurts like hell when that happens. Nicely expressed pain and sadness.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/30/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thank you Chris

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