Unrequited Love

As walking over blazing hot coals 
Is the love that blooms suddenly
Deceiving the naive heart
Ensnaring fantasies
Weaved with the lies
Planted in mind
Waking from
The vain
Dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Yes, the pain is intense ... Very well said ...
Negron Flores Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Thank you Probir
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November 30, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Yep, it sure is Nayda. It hurts like hell when that happens. Nicely expressed pain and sadness.
Negron Flores Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Thank you Chris
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