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unrequited love

growing collection of empty whiskey glasses unrequited love

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Date: 2/6/2015 6:13:00 PM
lynne really very beautifully painted piece
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Lynne Hanson
Date: 2/6/2015 6:39:00 PM
thanks Liam!
Date: 2/6/2015 5:48:00 PM
Yes. Ich liebe. I've read over about ten of your Haiku's now but I haven't commented on all of them. This one, hopefully, has not been lived. I admire your writing. Thank you for the read.
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Date: 1/21/2015 1:40:00 PM
spilled whiskey runs on the hard polished floor, mixing with the tears
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Jim Tidd
Date: 1/25/2015 9:09:00 PM
The haiku didn't present in traditional lines, unfortunately.
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Lynne Hanson
Date: 1/25/2015 8:02:00 AM
very nice Jim!
Date: 12/26/2014 7:18:00 PM
growing collection of empty whiskey bottles and glasses = I think we have a big problem! love this clever haiku:-) hugs jan xx
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Lynne Hanson
Date: 1/25/2015 8:02:00 AM
haha ... thanks Jan!
Date: 12/26/2014 5:23:00 PM
Lynne, I like you take here on "Unrequited Love." Quite novel indeed. I wrote a poem some time ago on Unrequited Love as well. A "7" from me!! Best Holiday Wishes, Gary
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Lynne Hanson
Date: 12/26/2014 5:27:00 PM
thanks so much Gary ... best of the holiday season to you as well! Lynne