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Unrequited

I looked at you once, I looked at you twice, I could only see your fading lights. I touched you once, I touched you twice, I could only feel your unmelting ice. I called your name once, I called your name twice, I could only wait through my lonely nights. You looked at me once, you looked at me twice, you couldn't see my hurt inside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/29/2016 9:17:00 AM
Well done! Glad creative searches.
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 11/29/2016 10:52:00 AM
Thank you, Bozhidar: )
Date: 11/18/2016 11:25:00 PM
A very nice poem on unrequited love ... a reader can feel ...
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 11/19/2016 2:43:00 AM
Thank you :)

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