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Unrelenting Rains

These tears... Unrelenting rains I try But, I cannot wipe them away Pouring upon This dear letter Of your scripted words waterfalls into blurs Further and further Fallen whirlpool of pains Draining downward But,the message Still remains the same A verse of love Put about by disdain Salt dissipates into ink And faults into blames What is left? But, the things I cannot change Reasons mixing Into muddled greys These tears Unrelenting rains Stain this page Stain this page

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Date: 4/13/2013 10:02:00 PM
Michael, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new week coming up. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA**
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Date: 4/13/2013 8:40:00 PM
Hauntingly beautiful, Michael...congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Soup! Annalise
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Date: 4/8/2013 5:01:00 AM
really fine work, so sad a subject but so well done. funny enough just listening to Emmylou Harris's 'love hurts' seems to apt for the moment. Have a blessed day, Gordon
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