Unrelenting

Right as things turn it eventually crumbles
An overwhelming life in our love is at last
Just as we dread the bursting of our bubble
This is an opportunity we will not let pass
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mullan Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 6:38 AM
When I read this, in my head I hear a strong voice. Very interesting, I like it.
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