Unrehearsed

Don't ever forget it could always be worse That could be you in a box in that hearse

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/27/2020 4:34:00 PM

G'day Gershon … I've often heard that there is no better feeling than walking out of a cemetery - thank yo Gershon - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 6:16:00 PM

Heh, heh: Esp. if you'd actually been buried! Cheers, Gershon

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 1/27/2020 3:25:00 PM

Brings one right back down to earth. All of a sudden my worries don't seem a problem. Great write Gershon...Ron :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 6:15:00 PM

Gravity-inducer = wooden casket. 'Nuff said there. Thanks, Ron. ~ Gershon

Jean Bush

Date: 1/27/2020 2:21:00 PM

Wow! A damning truth in simple lines. Yes, we do forget.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 2:27:00 PM

And better forgotten, unless there's need to deal with it. Cheers, Gershon

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/27/2020 12:01:00 AM

Sometimes I forget.. Sometimes I tried to forget.. Good deep poem Gershon..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/27/2020 2:24:00 PM

Right you are. I think our natural inclination is not to dwell on unpleasant sights. Thanks, Jenish. ;) Gershon